December Nights

I love this piece. It gives an air of mystery and yet tells all. At first I thought that the way you used the term "dog" was normal. But then ...

*Yawns* oh, yeah, wait, okay, so your poem, it was confusing. I sense no whatever the other person said. Plus I'm tired and an suffering through English class right now, ...

Yeah, it does kinda seem a little short. But hey sometimes a great many things can be said, short and sweet. Like the word "yes" can answer in so many ...

oh my. I love this, I can feel the tears falling on the paper. Oh it reminds me of my friend who's dad abuses her and her sister. It kinda ...

The title could be something different because the only line that relates to it is the last one. This is like poetically asking someone out, right? Because that's what I ...

ME LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE!!! I love this kind of poetry! It just speaks wonderful things to me. I love your theme thing, but in the description thing you make ...

AAAAHHHH!!!!!!!!!! its a good thought but not exactly a good poem. It has it's highlights, but delete the smile guy and if you're going to capitalize "He" and then not ...

I guess it was okay. But I don't like reading such advanced grammar all the time. It would have been less of a bother if it was consistant. You just ...

How can the haze make the days fade so fast? The memory of your smiling voice, it was blind to your face but you could hear it in the way ...

Me likey! It didn't have the deep emotion lyrics that could confuse some people, it had some easily recognisable analogies. I could feel myself sticking my tounge out at the ...

The reason why I was attracted to click on this poem is because I have been trying to write one called "blue eyes". And to be honest, based on what ...

That was a great idea. It could be lyrically a little better I have to agree with who said it could be better. But it was a good draft of ...

I think that the beginning two lines should be merged. The 'I know" is a little to repetitive. I know that honors English poems can be a little daft though ...

In the beginning the poem seems empty. And kind of unneeded like you could take off some of it. And the idea of two people being fire and water is ...

That is such a cool poem. It totally reflects the warrior princess thing. It is great. But one thing is that it goes down really long. So you might want ...